Friday, May 23, 2008

HOORAY! I sort of finished something!

"Now, when the day goes to sleep and the full moon looks
The night is so black that the darkness cooks
Dont you come creepin around - makin me do things I dont want to"


Peter Green - The Green Manalishi


7 comments:

  1. It kinda has a Vaughn Bode vibe to it. The nose is fairly phallic in the last panel - was that on purpose? Lots of detail in that last panel too. I like the way that the sweaty moon reflects the sweaty wolfguy.

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  2. He was originally the "Panty Wolf" and a girl's panty cakes were going to make him change - hence the phallic shnozz.

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  3. Great one pager, if this ever sees print you might think of blacking out the text at the top? I think that would help balance the panel with the flat black background.

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  4. Would be cool to see another page of the story where the nose developes into a penis/caterpiller hybrid and breaks free of the guy's face then when he turns back into a human he is left with a hole in his face where the nose once was.

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  5. Holy crap that's an awesome idea, Zeke!

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  6. another beastly good one, Matthew, and i second Aeron's suggestion of darkening the title.
    The grays are ink wash?

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