Ok here's three pages that follows last post
As the deadline is coming I just finished here, maybe a bit brutal ending?
This illustrate how it could be difficult to follow same feeling during weeks with few sessions of drawing in it
Im not sure if images page 4 (which is page 2 here) works, pannels 2&3, I think the big worm curse the first charcter but it's maybe not clear enough
It's clear to me. Well done!
ReplyDeleteit seems way clearer than the first page on the previous post and that one was readable.
ReplyDeleteThank you dude! I use unreadable semi-ironicaly, i often had remarks about that
ReplyDeleteReads just fine to me, good comic! besides, nothing wrong with a bit of ambiguity in a comic.
ReplyDeleteyes, i second zeke's comment about ambiguity in comix!
ReplyDeleteand yeah, it's a really nice lookin' comic you got there.
Thank you dudes! I probably pay too much attention on it... hope publisher will like it too!
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