it is a cool concept , hmm interesting
You might try pushing a sort of William S Burroughs cut and paste method into this to get some unique results. - aeron
I like it. I'm not sure I can spell it out.I think the major downfall of a lot of comics like these is that the creator feels a need to be obliquely clever, responding to an apparent need to show us why it's in comics form. I like them more when it's like some kind of spontaneous secretion. But yeah, it's good stuff.
i don't think the double barreled blast of ambiguity works, the graphics are FANTASTIC, but i would edit the text to the bare bones and then half again.
Those are good suggestions/comments. When I'm drawing I typically get pretty dosed on caffeine and I end up writing little poems in the margins of the pages. I (in a more sober state) editing some of them together to form these strips, but I agree that they would possibly work a little better if the text were as much a spontaneous response to my environment as the drawings are.
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