Thursday, January 02, 2020

The Twin Paradox, page 3-11 redone

Happily working on a new story, 'The Twin Paradox'. Left: old version, right: new version. Had to redraw this page for better pacing. Which isn't so hard/boring to do, once the decision is made. Usually, many details get improved while i am at it.
So the last panel was left out, but after this page two extra pages will be thrown in. This is from chapter 3 while i am already in chapter 5, but often i feel like re-editing older parts. The sketching phase is quite short for the sake of spontaneity, so i am willing to run the extra mile in a later phase of the process.