Ok here's three pages that follows last post
As the deadline is coming I just finished here, maybe a bit brutal ending?
This illustrate how it could be difficult to follow same feeling during weeks with few sessions of drawing in it
Im not sure if images page 4 (which is page 2 here) works, pannels 2&3, I think the big worm curse the first charcter but it's maybe not clear enough
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It's clear to me. Well done!
it seems way clearer than the first page on the previous post and that one was readable.
Thank you dude! I use unreadable semi-ironicaly, i often had remarks about that
Reads just fine to me, good comic! besides, nothing wrong with a bit of ambiguity in a comic.
yes, i second zeke's comment about ambiguity in comix!
and yeah, it's a really nice lookin' comic you got there.
Thank you dudes! I probably pay too much attention on it... hope publisher will like it too!
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