while its interesting the jump the text narrative take in the last panel, overall, it doesn't work for me.The graphics are freaking awesome, and i think by far your best use of color yet.
Oh and also, your use of text as texture in the third panel, please keep experimenting with that, it looks great.
I have no idea why and I'm sorry to not give a more critical comment, but these colors make me want to eat one of those red white and blue popsicle that look like a rocket, eh, whatever they're called. Always had em in the ice cream truck when I was a kid.
I understand your critique of the narrative, but over the course of a few pages I think it might work itself out. I hope so. And, Aeron, that's the best analogy! It totally reminds me of the ice cream man now!
Yeah, I agree with Paleo. I love the overall look and feel of it, and although I think the last panel is the best looking of all of them, it feels a little tacked-on.Still, I'm really excited to see where you take this.I posted a little about "absract comics"- nothing serious- on my blog and used this image. Hope that's okay.
My avatar thingy look familiar, Jeffrey?
oersonally, I love experimental comics. And yes, now I TOO am thinking of BOMB POPS thanks. My only complaint is the abrupt change in language to the last panel. I want to see this whole thing in context. I love what you are doing.mostyn
Thanks, fellas! Totally alright to post about this in your blog, Luke!
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