EATEN BY DUCKS: Spiderman

Sunday, August 17, 2008

Spiderman

9 comments:

Jeffrey Meyer said...: Awesome!; August 17, 2008 at 8:20 PM
Paleo said...: while its interesting the jump the text narrative take in the last panel, overall, it doesn't work for me.

The graphics are freaking awesome, and i think by far your best use of color yet.; August 17, 2008 at 11:12 PM
Paleo said...: Oh and also, your use of text as texture in the third panel, please keep experimenting with that, it looks great.; August 17, 2008 at 11:14 PM
Aeron said...: I have no idea why and I'm sorry to not give a more critical comment, but these colors make me want to eat one of those red white and blue popsicle that look like a rocket, eh, whatever they're called. Always had em in the ice cream truck when I was a kid.; August 18, 2008 at 12:01 AM
Jason Overby said...: I understand your critique of the narrative, but over the course of a few pages I think it might work itself out. I hope so. And, Aeron, that's the best analogy! It totally reminds me of the ice cream man now!; August 18, 2008 at 3:15 PM
Uland said...: Yeah, I agree with Paleo. I love the overall look and feel of it, and although I think the last panel is the best looking of all of them, it feels a little tacked-on.
Still, I'm really excited to see where you take this.
I posted a little about "absract comics"- nothing serious- on my blog and used this image. Hope that's okay.; August 18, 2008 at 5:51 PM
Uland said...: My avatar thingy look familiar, Jeffrey?; August 18, 2008 at 5:52 PM
mostyn said...: oersonally, I love experimental comics. And yes, now I TOO am thinking of BOMB POPS thanks. My only complaint is the abrupt change in language to the last panel. I want to see this whole thing in context. I love what you are doing.
mostyn; August 18, 2008 at 9:06 PM
Jason Overby said...: Thanks, fellas! Totally alright to post about this in your blog, Luke!; August 19, 2008 at 8:27 AM

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